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Re: Like a Bullet to the Brain - One
Hey Ash! I saw you posted something new and I had to come check it out and you didn't disappoint. It was cute and the MC kinda reminded me of ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Dusting Off Angels
Hey Evi!, I'm Angel of Death but yo can me Angel. I really liked this. It was well written and I can feel Alex's emotions and you're very talented. I ...
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: Skies Labeled Lost
Hello there! Welcome to YWS! I'm Angel of Death but please call me Angel, everyone else does. I hope you stay here in this wonderful community of writers because I've ...
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: Of a Fool And His Son
Hello Jennifina! I quite liked this. It is one of my favorite Greek myths and I think you captured the gist of everything fairly well (if that was your intention) ...
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
Hello! I quite enjoyed it, but it was mostly because of the way that you used your words. I love words and I think they're just as good as the ...
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Four
Hey Ash! This wasn't as bad as you thought it would be, it was just too short for my taste but it started in a good place and ended in ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: Emma Hereford- Chapter I Part I
Hey there! I don't think we've met before but I'm Angel of Death but everyone just calls me Angel and I absolutely love stories like this, but anyways on with ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: Let's Paint the Roses Red
Hey Ash! I was going to read Chapter 4 first but I couldn't resist when I saw this. Beautiful title too. I knew that I shouldn’t have been feeling this ...
Jan 11, 2009 -
Re: Phased [3]
Hello again JC! After two more hours of being stared at, and several kind half-smiles, Kimber walked out onto the quad. Hordes of students, all well dressed and laughing with ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: Phased [2]
Hey JC! Sorry I didn't get to this earlier, but I'm here now. I like where this is going also, and I think that this has a lot of potential. ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: The Rogue ~ Two
Hey Merry! Sorry, Merry, sorry I'm late getting to this. I just started writing The Jane Effect again and I've modified it and changed the title to Rendition . I'll ...
Jan 10, 2009 -
Re: Evergreen [revised]
Ky!! This...was...breathtakingly beautiful. I loved this and... Whoa you just rendered me speechless, but sense I'm not talking, I can still type but my heart is tying itself in many ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Because - Chap. 25
I'm here again! No! No! NO! You can't do this...poor Vick =( Did it have to end there, did it truly have to end there? KJ you better make them ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Because - Chap. 24
Hey KJ! How are you? I hope your vacation went well. Wooh, it seems like I've been waiting forever for this! But let me tell you, it was sure worth ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: The Rogue ~ One
Hey Merry! Dry, crisp leaves of several colors fell down from the decaying trees, onto the bronze-touched path. Very good first sentence. On the front entrance on the sidewalk was ...
Jan 5, 2009
